Opinions welcome; let me rephrase - Opinions needed !!!11 (in a less desperate tone)
The following paragraphs belong to a story called Sharp prose, that will very soon be featured in Strangers. It hasn't been edited yet, since I've only just finished and I'm curious about your thoughts, so please don't refrain from posting them! Thank you.
“There are two strangers outside my house; they are strangers to each other.